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[V.V.F.]

Well, I waited for a long time to post my poem here.
Reasons? Personal problems, then forum was closed on reconstruction.
I'm not a stupid fan, just a man (poem-writer and not only) from Odessa, Ukraine who was impressed by the acting of Kirsten Dunst.
So, the time has come.
Read...

Do You Love Her ?
 
Look at her face and you'll understand
Now you're free, but then you're pent.
Look to the blue emotional eyes,
You'll feel that you're happy and sad if she cries.

And looking to them the question you hide
Like written in title remaining to bide.

You misunderstand all nothing today
And search for the words that you didn't say.
You don't want to think about her again,
But thoughts come to mind just giving the pain.

She maybe surmises existence of these,
It's time to uncover and speak on my knees.

I still is that you who looks to your eyes,
Looks to their depth and drowns in slice.
I do it again like I did it before
Forever in need to continue this chore.

The whispering pierces, so clear for me ?
You love her, and love is the greatest your lee...

24 december 2005


I would like Kirsten read it herself... She deserves it...

[Glen]

Nice poem there, where'd you learn to make one like that? Mostly I get some ideas from songs actually, not very original but it will do fine. Until someone figures it out.

There were bells on a hill but I never heard them ringing
No, I never heard them at all t'ill there was you.

[V.V.F.]

It's hard to answer how...
I just have a talent... and I use it evolving during last 7 years.